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Åtminstone blir man kreativ av problem! Lägger upp ett gäng låttexter (ja, de har mer eller mindre färdiga melodier och i vissa fall arr.) som jag då naturligtvis vill ha lite konstruktiv kritik på!
nr 1:
My baby says he loves me
but I think that it's a lie
He says he'd do anything for me
but he doesn't seem to try
I am so sick of feeling
that I'm caught in his grip
I don't want my baby smothering me
with another guilt trip
and I feel the time has come
for action andnot only words
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't believe we were meant to be
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't think it should be you and me
no more
My baby says he cares about me
but I don't believe it's true
As long as I'm within his reach
He doesn't care if I'm blue
And I'm so sick of feeling
that I'm not allowed to grow
New views are too appealing
for me to say no
but my love doesn't care for my future
he just cares about keeping me close
to love me or guard me I wonder
don't think that even he really knows
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't believe we were meant to be
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't think it should be you and me
no more
If you want me to be your sweetheart
then you'd better love me right
But I guess that you have missed that part?
My baby says he loves me
but I know it isn't so
I feel I'd rather be free
So it's time for me to go.
nr 2: Infantile Dirge
I thought that falling for you was a safe bet
That you'd never look my way
That I wouldn't once again have to
decide to leave my love
and be on my way
No, I never thought that
no, I never dreamed that
I coulde make someone new fall so soon
Nor did I believe that
someone who was just a bit of fun
could make my heart croon
... resten av texten kan man få läsa om man ber snällt, då det blir sjukt personligt.
nr 3:
Min älskling han lämnade mig
att söka fjärran strand
att återse vänner och släkt
och sitt fädernesland
Ödet försökte trösta mig
med musik, dans och sång
Men i mitt sinne fanns blott du
hela sommaren lång
Och om än inom räckhåll
så vore du som sand
Om jag försökte gripa dig
rann du snabbt ur min hand
Ödet försökte tröstia mig
erbjöd mig ny kärlek
Min enda rädsla var att bli
Den som åter svek
Långt bort mot horisontens rand
kommer min blick att gå
Mitt sinne ständigt drömande
Om den man jag ej kan få ..
Personer med känsliga tår, var varnade! Och nej, allt är inte bokstavligt menat.
nr 1:
My baby says he loves me
but I think that it's a lie
He says he'd do anything for me
but he doesn't seem to try
I am so sick of feeling
that I'm caught in his grip
I don't want my baby smothering me
with another guilt trip
and I feel the time has come
for action andnot only words
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't believe we were meant to be
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't think it should be you and me
no more
My baby says he cares about me
but I don't believe it's true
As long as I'm within his reach
He doesn't care if I'm blue
And I'm so sick of feeling
that I'm not allowed to grow
New views are too appealing
for me to say no
but my love doesn't care for my future
he just cares about keeping me close
to love me or guard me I wonder
don't think that even he really knows
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't believe we were meant to be
Let go of me baby
Let go of me
I don't think it should be you and me
no more
If you want me to be your sweetheart
then you'd better love me right
But I guess that you have missed that part?
My baby says he loves me
but I know it isn't so
I feel I'd rather be free
So it's time for me to go.
nr 2: Infantile Dirge
I thought that falling for you was a safe bet
That you'd never look my way
That I wouldn't once again have to
decide to leave my love
and be on my way
No, I never thought that
no, I never dreamed that
I coulde make someone new fall so soon
Nor did I believe that
someone who was just a bit of fun
could make my heart croon
... resten av texten kan man få läsa om man ber snällt, då det blir sjukt personligt.
nr 3:
Min älskling han lämnade mig
att söka fjärran strand
att återse vänner och släkt
och sitt fädernesland
Ödet försökte trösta mig
med musik, dans och sång
Men i mitt sinne fanns blott du
hela sommaren lång
Och om än inom räckhåll
så vore du som sand
Om jag försökte gripa dig
rann du snabbt ur min hand
Ödet försökte tröstia mig
erbjöd mig ny kärlek
Min enda rädsla var att bli
Den som åter svek
Långt bort mot horisontens rand
kommer min blick att gå
Mitt sinne ständigt drömande
Om den man jag ej kan få ..
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